The Hula Hoopin’ Queen Figurative Language Mentor Text

I just love the book I am going to share with you today! The Hula Hoopin’ Queen by Thelma Lynne Godin and illustrated by Vanessa Brantley-Newton is a delightful book full of great figurative language. It is a fantastic mentor text for introducing your students to several different types of figurative language… plus it lends itself to some hula hoopin’ fun at the end of the activity. 

This would be a great May activity- hitting academic targets and then allowing students to get outside to practice their hula hooping and burn off some energy! It’s a classroom win!

 

The Hula Hoopin’ Queen is available on both Amazon and Barnes and Noble, but a video of the book read by Oprah Winfrey is available for FREE on Storyline Online (Screen Actor’s Guild Foundation project)!

 
 
I just love the main character in the story. Her name is Kameeka and she is full of spunk. I also love the sense of community that you feel when you read this book. 
 
This book is GREAT as a mentor text for teaching figurative language
 
There are examples of onomatopoeia in the story…
honk
tappin’
snappin’
swish
roar
 
There are examples of alliteration in the story…
swish, swiggle, swish is repeated many times throughout the story
 
There are examples of similes…
Mama stands still as water in a puddle.
streetlights shine like stars
heart is racing as fast as the roller coaster at Coney Island
noddin’ her head like a spring robin looking for a worm                                                                                                                
 
There are examples of metaphors…
sidewalk is cooler than a spring rain
Mama is madder than a hornet,
 
 
 

I have a quick Figurative Language organizer and a fun art extension that you can use with this book if you would like to! Grab it for free here ⇩

 
 
 
 
 
You could also check with your P.E. teacher for hula hoops. You could take your students to the playground or gym (during an open time) to have their own hula hoopin’ contest! 
 
 
-Kim
 
 

If you are looking for additional activities to keep your students learning, busy, and having fun that last week of school, you might want to check out the following set of End of the Year Writing Prompts!

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Hi, I'm Kim !

I love creating engaging resources for elementary school students (specifically 2nd and 3rd graders) and teachers, too!    I live in Independence, Missouri with my husband and pups! 

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